All Comments on 'Dumbing Down for Mom'

Boo

Why mention Literotica? Why take a person out of the story like that?

A good approach but seemed really rushed, especially at the end. Lacked any real eroticism

Lol at the ending. Good stuff

Was a good story until you had to ruin it with a old shaved pussy. Shaved is not very exciting for 42 year old woman. Shaved is for skanks

i wanted timo. i really did

Great story doc

Entirely too rushed at the end and the 4th wall breaking ruined it.

more about mom and roy

meh

Funny! 4*

Nah, 3 written better 5.

haha, cute. 5/5 Hate anonymous commentors....

Cute.

Are you Royster or Royston? Kind of confusing

With that ending,you literally snatched defeat from the jaws of victory!

Very creative. You can never fool mom.

It fell apart at the end. It was very creative up to that point and then a great disappointment.

Roy and mom have just started to have fun. Hope we see more.

Haha funny ending

It's fun.

It's just not terribly erotic.

2 stars, I thought the plan was to simple and everything had to fall perfectly into place for it to work. You need to work on your character arcs, they lacked depth

Like the story i agree a bit rushed at the end. Would like to see a couple cjapters to follow.

G

Great ending!

Ha! Of course, he got caught. Good ending.

Exceptional Story.

Have the story's about Roy and his mom been written yet?

I lost interest when I got to the part where she's hairless.

Very erotic and imaginative. I loved the ending and the way she gets her way with her son. A ch 2 would be appreciated.

5*

BJ

Awww man. That was a GREAT ending!! Cool story.

You rock sir !

Very rushed at the end there, wasn't it? Hope there's more.

Sounds like Mom wasn't the dunderhead he thought she was. Lucky for him she was nice enough to play along.

Good to include a laugh. Thanks Doc.

Lack of common sense at 18 is not necessarily the same at 42

You robbed me of an orgasm with that ending

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