All Comments on 'Dune Dame'

Hoping for part 2 and more

Missing pages? Part 2 ?

Great story. Sad to see not another few pages/part two yet!

2nd story of yours I have read.

Seems to be a pattern developing already.

Hope not

Cheers

Did I read Dyer described as tall, dark, handsome? He is a sophomore, so perhaps 20 years old? Give him a description: sexy body, maybe a few good hairs crossing his upper chest and abs, and hair on the arms and legs. They deserve a chance together.

Nice enjoyable story. Just needs to be finished.

I read these comments looking for more. Wake up, folks. The story was resolved and if that's all there is, that's all there is. Boy saves girl and gets her to hospital. Boy finds out the girl is okay. Boy and girl is reunited as the next semester starts.

As for the story, it is a nice, quick little tale that I enjoyed. Keep up the good work.

THANKS

Love the story. I thought it was great.

AAAAAA+++++

10 stars! Hope he and Katty fall in love, and make a bunch of little Straits...