All Comments on 'Duplexity Ch. 02'

I'm loving the story so far. Thank you for not waiting six months to a year for chapter two. So many writers just leave us hanging and never finish what they start.

I loved the first chapter and I'm loving this one too! You have a great writing style and Carson is such a likable protagonist. Him being torn between being a good friend and being selfish is sooo relatable :)

I literally lol'd like a hundred times while reading this. It's funny and interesting and it really draws you in. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter but don't be afraid to let it draaaaag out. Hope you post the next one just as quickly as you did this one. Keep up the great work venereae

And forgets about her readers. Real nice. If she does come back I hope the roommate doesn't have sex with that slut. As this is in the gay section. I hate those stories where the woman gets there first. Id move on and forget about him especially since he seems to be pretty observant to his gay friends emotions.

Don't be a dick a post half stories after people take the time to read them.

If your only going to bitch about the author and what you don’t like then maybe don’t comment, you look stupid. Doubt there will be an ending to the story, what a shame