All Comments on 'Durmantravada Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This chapter should have been longer!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Next chapter

Next chapter please

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
That's it ??

A page and a half, is that all you all you could come up with. Is this how you plan the next 18 chapters to be ??

I was looking forward to this. But now I'm disappointed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Cool

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Humble request

Please take less time in posting stories. If it's gonna be one chapter a month, atleast make it 4 to 5 pages long. That way the wait feels it's worth.

Spa_jackSpa_jackover 3 years ago

Great story! But please either post more

frequently or write longer parts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Low rated because lack of content

Too little content for too long a gap between stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Time Gap

One story per month Seriously !

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Waiting for the new episodes.

The waiting period kills the flow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More, more pls

Well over 10-12 days since your last release..Pls come back with more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Waiting for the next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Need more

Hey Buddy! Write more and make it a long story...include everyone..younger sister, mom...we are waiting patiently..but keep writing at least one chapter in two weeks

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great storyline

Please share the next one at the earliest. I refresh your profile page every two days to check if you have posted any.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
pls do continue

continue cheyyi mashe... kothipichi vidalle

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Frustrating

If u can't complete a story why u start one

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
The author is no more

Covid 19!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

How do you know that the author is no more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Please continue , hope you are fine and safe MR . Author . Really hoping and horny after viewing your story .... Hope to see more soon ..😋

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

When are you going to post more stories

MartyprMartypr20 days ago

Lastima que la historia esté inconclusa porque es genial. Si este mensaje te llega a través del tiempo… Por favor acábalo. Y gracias por tu gran historia.

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