All Comments on 'Dust to Dust Ch. 05'

i luv your stories but i waz hoping that u could do some more chapters on full moon strays. that is my fav of the ones u have writin please do more.let me know if u will my email is ice_man46@yahoo.com

as usual. You have me waiting impatiently for each new chapter of anything you write. Keep up the great work.

Great story, really well written, the only possible complaint was that it was shorter than 'endless' and perhaps that it ended a little abruptly. Glad you did finally decide to revisit DMW. Hope you have something else in the works soon as well - another DMW sequel or a full moon strays sequel would rock, or another one of your present-day romance things. Hell, I don't care, I just want to read more of your work!

What a great story. I especially liked how you incorporated the characters from DMW into this storyline. I hope that Ahsley going on "walkabout" provides more opportunities for more stories about her, Dusty and the Hybrid crew.

it was better than most of the stories on this site in the scifi fantasy section and i love that but if i had to rate your storys so far in that section it would be:

1.full moon strays since it had a great storyline and equal M/F and f/f

2. its a dead mans world i thought the storyline could possibly have been better and a tad more m/f and i hope you expand on it more

3. dust to dust it was lacking the same thrill of the other two maybe because it was the shortest of them all and had the least m/f but i just felt that the others had better main characters like jane and eliza and veronica in the other two but like i said better than others in the scifi fantasy section

Ok, so I'm in love here.. Please send me some of your girls ASAP.. Ps: You can come too :) Cheers Yoron.

Keep with the theme. Although you feel you've reached the end, I know there is more. Think about it.

I love the world you've created. It's vibrant and fully developed.

I would like to see more in this world. Possibly with these characters in the background.

Fantastic story! I loved the play off the previous series and the imagery.

Love this one too. I really enjoy how these stories connect to each other with the same concepts. It's really brilliant writing. Thanks to EA for sharing.

IDB

like many of your other stories, some of the most creative i've ever read. i hope you write more so i don't have to keep rereading your stories ;)

tyvm!

it would be great to see more of these characters and hybrid security

that noticed alpacas have really fuzzy butts?

Good story hun. Wish you could write 'em as fast as I read 'em :)

Lynn

When I began reading your works, I opened this one, saw Dead Man's World was the pseudo-prequel, and started there. I admit, I expected zombies or something like it. But I'm pleased to know both stories were so imaginative, original and downright entertaining.

First, my (few) criticisms, since they were so minor. Typos, grammar, and proofreading. Your chapters all have several errors, ranging from simple word mix-ups to inconsistencies, like naming the wrong person. While these aren't detrimental, they do distract from what the overall experience could be. A little once-over and some TLC could do wonders.

That being said, the positives far outweighed the few negatives, that I found the stories were addictive, "page-turners" so to speak.

Each of your characters have a certain life to them that makes your reader grow to care for them. They develop, have personal growth, learn and change - that makes them lovable or detestable, depending on their role.

The world (worlds in this case) breath and tick, with vibrant life. Prejudice of races, sexes, sexual preferences - these issues are addressed and feel real, lending well to the drama and interest in the story.

Finally, the action - sexual or dramatic - is flowing and engaging. Sex is hot, romantic at times, and doesn't feel forced or out of place. The action, likewise, is almost natural, and of course, awesome.

So bottom line, thanks for your creative contribution to the Literotica community. I thoroughly enjoyed these stories and with how vibrant the characters and worlds seem, any additions to this Earth-Terran realm would be well received and welcomed.

Rex

It got a brief mention in Dead Man's World, but doesn't seem to exist in Dust to Dust...was it just forgotten about? (Other than that, great as usual and wishing for more, despite knowing its never coming since there's been nothing for three years...)

I actually find myself sort of skimming through the sex scenes in your stories because the "story" is so good I want to get on with it. A good thing, strange as it may seem from an Erotic story site!

Hope you come back some day and do more writing. Until then, thank you!

This story struck a chord with me. A person with no emotions but logical being changed to an emotional person. Somewhat similar to my case.

Back to your writing. I felt the organization and flow was excellent. You gave enough details of the surrounding and feelings of the characters to make a person see and feel it firsthand. You made the story entertaining with a happy ending. Thank you.

I believe Evil Alpaca has left the building. I'm glad he left so many great stories behind.

what a great story! You have a great way to tell a story and make the reader feel your characters' emotions and thoughts.

Truly shows that love and life are really 2 powerful and amazing things on this earth

as always your excellent writing skills and style. creative, intense. i like the well thought out extended ending. the ending itself is a nice story.

i vote for more dust to dust!

didn't understand how ash got turned alive again from dead but i like happy endings ty

when u described how ash was killed thought crossed my mind how did they think of something so unimaginably horrible nightmare phobia or sick mind like the nazis? or was it a metaphor for living through something incredibly painful or unique macabre thoughts like poor poe

another 5 star offering.

Here are my list of Errata

Tom McBride and Jon Trendenfall were sitting Dr. Trendenfall's office,

telepathic blasts to know away the incendiary grenades

one of they're successes

the Eliza and Veronica was no small

This is epic ..... What a breathtaking lovely story and your talent of writing is hard to describe, stunning ....öö all the stars not only 5 for this tale

Wonderful imagiantion.

Get the story published as a hard copy.

Thankyou.

Truly a superb imagination and an accomplished story teller.

Fantastic teller-of-tales

I miss new writing from Evil Alpaca every time i log-in to this site. A wonderful imagination and a great understanding of both the human and terran condition.

Five super hypernovas with bells, claxons, sirens ands whistles.

Actually rereading (for the third time). Love the story - I do have to say that the first time I read it I kept expecting Ashley to get her talent back but remain human. But that was not to be.