All Comments on 'Dweeb Ch. 02 - Planning'

The first part really set up for a very interesting story but this second part just muddled up the story for me.

Sort of ok, you seem to have several storylines in one and lost the original story which showed promise at first.

Linnear and anonymous, thanks for your comments. This is a 'slice-of-life' tale with several characters, each with a part to play. (And, Mano, perhaps some or even all the characters are 'trash', but I'm not the one to make the judgement.) I hope future chapters, if they are read, clear up the muddle and coalesce into a larger arc. Keep reading and sharing your thoughts. MP2 :-)

I don't see where any of this should be in the incest category ?