All Comments on 'Early Works - Incest Mode'

I like your stories, but I'm not into urine or feces. Reading that this story contained water sports saved me from investing time and discovering it on my own. It'd be nice if more writers would be as considerate.

I look forward to reading your next story (or the warning at the beginning of it).

Glad it helped you avoid something that you don't like / wouldn't want to read. :)

I would add that I think that I should have added "(minor)" at the end of those watersports warning, though - from memory I think it's covered in just 2-3 lines.

or very nearly so. You are a very talented author. Your diction is flawless, and your talent for revealing the inner passions of each character is just brilliant.

Thank you for sharing this amazing story with us and please give us more.

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