by EricMorrison
Enjoyed the unvarnished erotic humor in the chapter. 'Like Jake's mom and my dad, she thought we were going too fast.' Good advice for the early part of the chapter. You recovered for the remainder.
Keep the story going! Jake's hairy chest is a powerful turn-on for Danny, who obviously feels so safe and comfortable wrapped in the warmth of Jake's muscular and masculine chest. Jake in a real gentleman. These two emerging lovers have so much to give to each other as loving partners, and their explorations are just beginning! More, More!
So Jake is extremely experienced is he? So he wasn't pining away for Danny all that time? He was out fucking and getting blowjobs? since he said what Danny did was the best blowjob her ever had? And clearly telling Danny he would be able to deep throat him with practice? Jakes had others that did it?
Even though there are a few loose ends, there is good insight into the gay teenage mind, and the characters are sweet, but poorly delineated. We need to know more about Danny and Jake in addition to their physical appearance. But I enjoyed it.