All Comments on 'Earning My "A"'

by NotHisLady

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
NICE

Very good. I liked it. More please. And putting it in this category rather than 'Loving Wives' seems to have kept some of the trolls at bay.

MichaelG

AimTwoPleaseAimTwoPleaseabout 11 years ago
Authentic

The emotions you express are truly authentic - and very nicely translated into words. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good story.

Well written and very erotic. Let the "Victorians" stew in their own antiquated hypocritcal and moralistic juices. Live, laugh and love! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Very well written to say the least but the so-called trolls are right, adultery is not romantic. But you won't get a 1 from me because I do think thew writing was solid...the characters however are morally bankrupt.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Earning your "A"?

More like "A+"!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More like "F"

Where's the romance?

PorkwarriorPorkwarriorabout 11 years ago
I Get It

I get the emotions of your characters, and the romance of this story. What you left out was the long Internet seduction, and the ecstasy of having a fantasy turned into reality even BETTER than it was when you played it over in your head on those cold, lonely nights.

And no, an adulterous romance is NOT an oxymoron!

passionatefoolpassionatefoolabout 11 years ago
so sexy

I loved this story - sexy, sweet, a little kinky, and very human and real. Thanks for writing!

eliasrotica3eliasrotica3almost 11 years ago
Very well done

I clearly see the backstory of internet seduction and this tale being the culmination of not just sexual fantasies but romance and falling in love. Good detail, moves along briskly and takes us to fun places.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Oh yeah

Romance is always best when it's built on the back of a loved ones pain, huh?

skruff101skruff101about 3 years ago

Well that’s nice another marriage bites the dust. Ain’t love grand.

lover1953lover195311 months ago

And soon there's going to be 2 divorces. Good writing.

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