All Comments on 'Earthworks'

Lots of fun, not particularly erotic, but a very nice old school horror story. The other side of Jane Austen.

Unusual scene. Not what I expected, but I agree that it should have been listed as "Erotic Horror". That being said: well written, but I will go along with resolution by "coincidence"

The thing I object to was the drugging. People magically go down to the local K-mart and by these types of drugs? Drugs that are so powerful that even a slight overdose can cause horrible side effects, including death. And Rosemary just magically knows the correct dosage? Seems too improbable even for fiction and it ruined any chance the story had to be a good read. Liked SOME of your stories in the past. This one - not so much.

Erotic horror perhaps. Interesting story though. 3*

I found it too menacing to be Fetish, I'm afraid I think I agree with the others about it being Erotic Horror!

Good luck, I'm sure it will rebound after the sweeps.

Txxx