by JBEdwards
Erotic sex! Not the sex you think your parents have. Five stars!
This story was hot. I love your writing style, you are a talented writer.
JB, it's not nice to submit an anonymous comment on your own story saying what a talented writer you are! However true the comment may be, you should not have submitted it! I'm surprised at you. I thought you were above such behavior. I thought you were better than that. Shame on you!
Some replies. First of all, a big thanks to Anonymous (Hot) for your kind words. A big lack of thanks to LegsFeetToes for accusing me of sending an anonymous comment on my own story.
I sign all of my comments, on all stories, or I don't leave a comment.
An apology to Anonymous (Name Shift) for having messed up with the names, and to all other readers, too. I hope you enjoyed the story despite my f**kup. Thanks to all, JB
O.K., I confess! My "Tsk, tsk" comment to JB is not serious. I know she would not do that. If you read my comment, please understand that my tongue was in my cheek when I made it. I should have put this at the end of it - ;-) - to try to make it clear that it was not serious.
Mea culpa, mea maxima culpa!
Why on earth is this in nonconsent? It's not even reluctant, let alone nonconsent.
That was really hot!! A bit confusing due to the name mix up (Eric to Brian?) But I assume that Mr X was in fact, Sven? I hope so. Loved the rich/wealthy descriptions, felt they were pretty on point... even a little relatable, idk what that says about me haha. Hope you keep writing.
Loved it! Now, after a couple of years, have you settled on the identity of the unknown rapist? (Well, she didn’t unequivocally consent, did she?)
Good read.. I'm not a writer.im a reader and I'm a pervert so needless to say great read⁴..you didn't.t over do the physical explanation..even if they weren't.t forcing her..it was still.incest
I no of things like this and trust me in and out.again good read thanks