All Comments on 'Eat, Sleep, Masturbate'

It just plain sucked.

Don’t listen to the haters that was a great first chapter tease

I am ready to read more - off to a great start

Strong first effort, better than most I've read. A good foundation creating a lot of possibilities

Besides watching my mother undress, saw dad naked a lot.

A very good story. The only slip-up I found was when it was initially announced when the sister would be arriving; the line is missing.

I think just like the last guy wrote it sucked

Loved it, super hot scenario for my kink. Not sure you need to use such fancy words but your choice. It is “shuddered” not “shuttered” but You probably saw that to late.

Personally, I never had a partial cum like the one described but don’t doubt that it could happen. I once came -- when both terrified and turned on — instantly, without an erection, so I know the body can do weird stuff.

Loved the story. I can clearly see me and my dad doing this as i read. would have loved to have seen a lil more action from dad though lol

This is how I wish I grew up! It’s so hot!!! My dad used to sneak in my room and watch me wank, I wish we could’ve done it all around the house