All Comments on 'Ebb and Flow - A Bystander's Life'

The author has written a very long, very boring story . His submission has no erotic content whatsoever.

Needs to have more ripping and stripping in his catfights!

He's a moron, she's a mean slut. I would have returned the favor and beat the shit out of her.

That was a superb tale - lot's of suspense with great surprises. I loved the slutty Jenn seen from a different angle. Keep up the good work.