All Comments on 'Ebullient Little Sister Ellie'

One of the sexiest, most well written stories I ve read here in sometime...Good Job !

Loved this! Great story developed it very well.

Beautifully paced and well written with characters that I can believe in. All that I could possibly want and highly erotic as well.

Give oh-so-sexy Matt a dusting of sexy chest hair for that muscular man chest! His chest hair could gently graze against her nipples as they lay together!

🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃

Great story. Love to read about further adventures. Love the build up to the climax. Please do a chapter 2...

Average at best. You have potential but your pacing is off and your characters stilted and unbelievable. I’ve read worse, which is why I gave you an average reading.

Very cliché but i will still vote 5* as it's for a contest

Romantic and sexy! Well done.

It was very well written and I truly hope you will write more!! It would be great to see them continue their love! So I hope to see chapter 2 soon.

Really loved it. The romance added so much.

I will tell my girlfriend about this story.

great job, loved it. The past relived.

Barely readable. So clumsy in spots that I wanted to stop reading. Repetitive. Four pages of mediocrity that could easily have been pared to two. A proofread would possibly have helped, possibly not. I'm somewhat proud I had the stamina to finish. I hope your next attempt is better.

Well done. 5 🌟

Good premise.

But sex is too automatic. And moves along much too fast. Why the rush to orgasm/s?

Three stars.

Nicely done, but the lack of a closing chapter or two means 4 stars.

Tha premise is old hat, but the dialogue seems fresh enough.

There are only so many ways to tell this story.

Bill S.

Very enjoyable.

I keep reading your stories and think, "someday I am going to finish the last story and your writing skill will be missed."

That was freaking amazing, what a great story of love and torrid sex.