by Frank_Lee
Greatest story I read so far.. plus I love thick woman that made it even better
I gave it 5*. This shoulda been put in Romance ategory, where i think it would have earned higher numbers. I also agree you could have a sequel which does get put in the Romance category. It was great to see a successful man realize that love is so much more than skin deep.
Often works out that guys got for the bitchy Tina types when someone much better is right in front of their face.
While I somewhat agree that not every good story needs to be a series, I do disagree with regard to this one.
Still either way; what better compliment to a writers work than to say it should have been longer because I didn't want to stop reading it?
I agree that you could have stretched it into a series... but not everything has to be a series. A nice, short, well written story is well appreciated. This was perfect.
Too rushed, too fast. You made a stand alone that easily could have been a series