All Comments on 'Ecstacy'

I'm not sure I really want to read more of this author since the story in really incoherent, but as it is....it isn't much of anything. Some of the commenters would be clamoring for more chapters and some will be asking for his (or her) head. I certainly don't want more of this disjointed prose so I'll just suggest that the author take the time to read his own story and answer the question as to whether or not he/she would enjoy reading this him/her self. 2* for bravery