All Comments on 'Edie and the Elves'

That I will ever think of elves the same way again.

Always, E

How I will face Santa and his elves this year is beyond me. My face will be positively scarlett. Great read.

You wrote that Lamont was 3' 10" tall. That's 46 inches total. His dick is 11". So you are saying that his dick is one quarter of his entire body length? Talk about being a true tripod. He must have been a real elf, because if he was human and got an erection, he would pass out from lack of blood to his big head. Although with such a big dick, it could get confusing about which head was biggest.

Great story and good luck in the contest.

I wasn't sure for a while there if they were magical elves or simply humans playing elves? Fun premise, though, you had a great time with it! Good luck!

You get an "A" for originality! A delightful romp!

I've been TOTALLY enveloped in your story. This is definetely one of my favorites of all. A+!!!

You had me from the first paragraph.

Fantastic story and I love your writing.

nowwhat@oddlycurious.com

This was kind of a different story to what I usually like to read, but it was sexy and fun! Thanks soo much!

xox

Heather

But instead of having Edie discover that real people with full-sized hearts with the same feelings as everyone else dwelled beneath their diminutive exteriors, you have them drug and rape her. What a malformed spirit you must have, to write this pathetic drivel and think it erotic.

The sex was barely described and I didn't like that the daughter had to be brought into it. Could have been much better.

i loved it..it actually turned me on lol

i think you could have described the sex scene a little better and i think it all happened a little to fast for me

but other then that, it was great

WRITE MORE STORIES(ABOUT DWARVES) PLEASE

Excellent story - hot, sexy and kinky

Keep them cuming.

Live your work xxxxc