All Comments on 'Educating Harry Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Excellent first chapter

Jerry in Washington state, USA - I think you have laid the groundwork that could be an excellent series of chapters. I look forward to Harry learning from the older women. I like the variety of personality and physical appearances of the women, which I feel will keep the various chapters interesting. I do hope you are able to continue writing this story - I will add you to the small group of favorite authors who have multi-part stories that I check daily for new chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
In Character

Nice beginning to a story. Much more realistic than most writing here and clear character development. Liked it.

Aithne.

mcollectmcollectabout 13 years ago
The correct way to write a story

Now continue adding more true feelings and events. BTW one of the best on this site!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Good read and this story has an ending so enjoy it

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