All Comments on 'Educating John Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Outstanding Erotica

Wonderful erotic suspense. I hope Val coaches John on how to fuck his mom when she returns. thanks for a great story.

Bill

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
What a Wonderful Tone!

You are doing a simply smashing job of setting just the right tone, between John's eager naivete and Val's gentle "instruction." Keep up the good work! I haven't quite made up my mind whether there's an internally-credible way to include John's mum in the evolution of the story, but if you want to go that way, I'm sure you'll think of something!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
epitome of an excellent mature category story

What great suspense. I love this story. My only gripe: enough with the handjobs and jerking off, she needs to blow him before she takes his virginity.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefalmost 4 years ago
We all came together!

Dam, this is so hot that I just had to join in with them. Wish I had a friend like Val when I was growing up, but then I wasn't a virgin when I turned 18, but we still could have had fun.

Love the buildup and can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks

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