by seaspirit
Wonderful erotic suspense. I hope Val coaches John on how to fuck his mom when she returns. thanks for a great story.
Bill
You are doing a simply smashing job of setting just the right tone, between John's eager naivete and Val's gentle "instruction." Keep up the good work! I haven't quite made up my mind whether there's an internally-credible way to include John's mum in the evolution of the story, but if you want to go that way, I'm sure you'll think of something!
What great suspense. I love this story. My only gripe: enough with the handjobs and jerking off, she needs to blow him before she takes his virginity.
Dam, this is so hot that I just had to join in with them. Wish I had a friend like Val when I was growing up, but then I wasn't a virgin when I turned 18, but we still could have had fun.
Love the buildup and can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks