All Comments on 'Eighteen Candles'

As good as it gets on this site!

As good as it gets...so true!!!!!! Thanks!

Simply outstanding.

Except for the weird agey stuff, that was my EVERY fantasy.

I enjoyed this a lot. Creative idea and well executed.

Very well written and executed. I'm surprised this one isn't doing better in the contest.

I think is it hard enough just to write a story, any story. But making a decision to write one for a contest has to be many times more difficult. This one was nicely done and if I had come across it sooner I would have voted for it.

I love this story, on the strength of this one alone I wish you were still posting on Literotica. You have a talent for telling great stories.