All Comments on 'Eighty One - Laura's Story Pt. 06'

Love this!!!! I hope there are 90 chapters!!!!!

This is getting much better. Finally a decent ratio of action to build up and transition.

I bet 50 funbucks that they are all in on this: Weston, Andrew and Abbie.

I bet 50 further funbucks that the 'moral' of this story will be that she will 'win' the game by becoming what she was allways 'meant' to be.

And I bet another 50 funbucks that when all this betrayal around her will be reveiled to her, she won't even mind it very much, even a batrayal on this scale would shatter any sensible person, because they just showed her what she allways was meant to be and she was so aroused by it all.

I hope I loose all those bets, because goddamn... that would be just sooo depressing.

Dear EssEssCeh:

Apparently you haven’t read “Seventy-Three”. If you’d read the stories in chronological order you’d understand the dynamic here.

Do your research.