All Comments on 'Elan Pt. 06 - Cast Aside'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WTF?

I do like the story but changing the title to the same story for different chapters is the dumbest thing I've seen ever. it's impossible to follow the story when you miss complete sections. how about condensing some of the chapters to about 10-15 pages long and sticking with one title?

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 1 year ago

Power is consuming every mind if this mind is not grounded with a heart &soul binding energy ...... it was so in the past and will be in the future, that's implement in human beings ...... But rayya is travelling a scorching path

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All my stories exist in the same fantasy world. You can find the map of said world here: https://i.imgur.com/njRJtmY.jpg I'm currently working on 'Echoes of Spring' and 'A Dream of Empire'. The prologue to 'A Dream of Empire' begins with "Luck Pt.01 - A Chance Meeting". It...

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