All Comments on 'Electra Complex Ch. 02: Gangbanging My Little Sister'

Justin needs to get into an incestuous affair with Astrid and we need to see every detail. Great writing, riveting story. Looking forward to more.

Dude arranges his ‘friend’ to basically rape his sister, and just gets punched? You have no idea how to write. You fail. I award you no points and may god have mercy on your soul.

This was so enraging

This was terrible

I agree with the first guy. Good story. Rape? Not hardly. Should Tim get the Crap kicked out of him? Hmmmmmm. Astrid made over $5k? She didn't seem missed at Justin on his wedding day so be it. Love to read more of those 2. Good job.

3 stars

How can he continue working for Tim?

I love your writing style! Feeling the characters emotions works! When is the next chapter?

Loved both stories in this short series, I hope you continue. Great potential for mom/daughter, teacher/student etc.!

Thank you!

Poor ending, and the Big Bad Wolf send Tim to his grave.

Life isn't always fair But. These two stories need REVENGE!! Without revenge these stories are nothing and leave the reader wondering why they wasted their time reading them!!

Great story