All Comments on 'Electrician'

Not a good story. Sounds like the woman was retarded and fucking retarded people is just sick and weird.

Beth? Gwen?

Remorse, reports him. He's unemployed. Not very bright.

it's outstanding! I gave it a big old 5

For vastiesmith2, alias bonnietaylor2

Fun quotient is high, realism is low (so what?), but the Gwen vs. Beth was a silly mistake that suggests you do not proofread carefully--shows lack of respect for your readers.

eat shit dear annony!!

Doesn't that sound wonderful. If bonnie gives a story a five star rating, you know it's nothing but shit. Gave it a ONE STAR. happy now bonnie?

My wish for the new year is to never read another word from the stupidest people on this site.

The story is a study in wishful thinking, acting as if and mixes some decent, indecent humorous observations to hoot'. I enjoyed it for what it was. Full marks. *****

poor bonnie/vastie... all pissed because not even animals will fuck her old diseased tranny cunt, so she passes her days stalking LIT feedback board...

do us a favor and kill yourself! even your whore mother and cuck father will be happy!

so go in your basement and jerk your little cuckette off and piss yourself. Old man that you are I bet women all laugh at you when you drop our pans. 5 for a great story

It was a nice twist but can there be a submissive like that I'd love to meet her. It was a cute tale.

I always enjoy Ashson's irreverent missives ... some more than others, but the spread is pretty tight. This one relied too heavily, during the replacement visit, on a weird dress configuration. Perhaps, in an Illustrated format, it would have been easier to visual. Our Hero's tongue-in-cheek rejection of her deliberate enticement motive was, I think, gratuitous, He just wanted to get the main job done before taking on a penis replacement for Sweetie.

Retardation would have been easy to detect given the extent that Sweetie spoke.

Bonnie, sweetness (love your lingerie choice), please just take your admirers to the chat room. Bonnie Haters (yeah, I used to dip my favorite girl's pigtails in the inkwell in 4th grade. DIDN'T work! She hated me all the way through HS graduation, even when I dropped the 'pest' tactic in 5th grade!), it won't work for you, either. All the 'clever repartee' insulting her will NOT get those delectible black bikinis dropped by your bed! Cannot understand the dedication of guys forcing themselves to read material they find offensive in an attempt to sanitize the (free) LW domain!

5* A good chuckle!

and add a push or two. A1. TK U MLJ LV NV

Funny flash story. 3*s and keep them coming .

Who is Gwen ? Was that supposed to be Beth ??

If electricians, instead of laborers or apprentices ,are replacing light bulbs . That's all good for the union . Probably not good for the country , lol.

AMerryman

wasn't born. She was hatched. That explains a lot. Watch out for feathers.

You dog! Lovely flash tale.

R

Who cares it it actually happened or is realistic. It was nicely written, and once you buy into the story line you can enjoy the neatly described sex scenes.

As for her motive in giving herself so readily, the story leaves it nicely to the reader's imagination.

My thought is that her husband knows, and she describes what happened when he gets home from work. He just loves that his wife is so fuckable, and that when he asks her to, she'll let the electrician, plumber, pool hand or whoever, think they're fucking her behind her husband's back. She goes along with it because it makes her husband fuck her harder and more often, and because she loves him, and loves the sex as well..So my guess is it was not the wife who unscrewed the leds.

That was her husband.

Who cares..