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by JeremyWasHere

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THoney269THoney269over 3 years ago

🔥🔥🔥

Love it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I want to hear something like 'The Funeral done by princebreed from you Jeremy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good grief… edit out the breathing. It is so awful that it sounds like you are sucking snot. I could not finish the story, envisioning a handicapped mouth breather. Second, change the tense… maybe, third person past tense. You are telling her what happened. She already knows. Tell us, not her. Story concept is okay, but lags and drags. Get to it.

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Hello all you sexy people and thanks for taking the time to read (or at least skim through) this. My name is Jeremy and I really LOVE the Literotica platform. I also enjoy writing, recording, producing, and publishing “interesting” content for YOU. Whatever YOU want is whateve...