by centavos
Wow, this is fucking disgustingly misogynistic and age-fetishizing. It's clearly a man feeling more masculine for hurting a weak teenage girl he perceives as his ibferior, partially because of his inflated ego and job. Faith in humanity dissipating by the day.
I completely loved everything about this story, the whole tone of it was just incredibly erotic for me the entire way through. Some people may comment on it as unrealistic but A) its fantasy for a reason and B) in her place, I think I would have reacted exactly the same.
The characters have no motivation--which means he doesn't have any real reason to ask her for a BJ and she doesn't have any reason to agree. Also, learn to spell.
Great Story, nothing better than face fucking a cute little barely-legal blonde.
the story is just not cool man.
way too old fashioned and brutal.
plus, doing a blow job in the elevator is so cliche.
later..., man
Getting a bj in an elevator is not new, but the 'come-on' geeeeee, get real.