All Comments on 'Elevator Ride'

Thank you, Ada. This was a pleasant lunchtime read.

The story was nicely written and very easy to read. I myself couldn't help but wonder what time frame are we reading. Thong says one thing and pantyhose say another as for the year, Thong also leads to a more modern story where more modern elevators have "ta-da" security cameras which probably recorded the entire event. Just a thought. Will there be a chapter two?

Hm, I honestly forgot about the security cameras (and I guess they did too), but thanks for reminding me, lol.

As for the time frame, well, I like to leave that to the reader to choose what you want it to be :-)

Right now, I'm not sure if there will be a chapter two. I just write what I want to write or what feels most urgent to put down on 'paper' - and right now that is a Kidnapping story that will probably be published next week :-)

A gorgeous piece of work. Thank you!

Loved Sean and Eve together -- Sean is a sexy young man with the muscular chest and manly chest hair, the cock that more than satisfies her. Get them together again and again! He seems to make her happy!

"Loved it!

Loved Sean and Eve together -- Sean is a sexy young man with the muscular chest and manly chest hair, the cock that more than satisfies her. Get them together again and again! He seems to make her happy!"

- Thanks for the wonderful comment :-) I'm so happy that you liked my story, and thanks to you I reread it and I believe I will make an extended version of this one :-)

I love it I've read it several times over please continue writing!

"MY FAVOURITE

I love it I've read it several times over please continue writing!"

- Wow! Really? That is so cool :-) I would be really grateful if you (or any other reader too) could add what you like about it and what seems to be missing? Which questions are unresolved, etc?

I would really like to expand the story so this information will help me a lot :-)

Hi, the first story of yours I've read but definitely not the last. In fact easy to add you to the top of my favourite story list. Now I'll start working through your other stories

"Great story

Hi, the first story of yours I've read but definitely not the last. In fact easy to add you to the top of my favourite story list. Now I'll start working through your other stories"

- Wow, thanks :-) I'm so glad to have you on board and I hope you like some of my other stories as well :-)

Trotz der Kürze eine gelungene und unterhaltsame Geschichte. Wie ich an anderer Stelle erfahren durfte, ist eine verlängerte Version zumindest angedacht. Ich würde mich freuen!

This is the story that led me to read your other work which I have enjoyed immensely. I have read this story multiple times and each time it leaves me hoping for a sequel. Maybe one day???

The End?

Brilliant! I’ll have to take the elevator more than the stairs. Well done!

I admire your writing, very easy to read and keeps me entertained throughout.

MORE?

To Anonymous from Ada Stuart

Ah, yes, I have this story on my tasklist (somewhere). I really want to expand it and tell you what happened later. Thanks for the reminder :-)

Intéressante histoire, de séduction dans un lieu clos, contraints et forcés de se supporter alors qu'ils ne se supportent pas, enfin de faire semblant de se détester. Mais je pense qu'une suite n'amènerait rien. Laissons place à l'imagination.

I enjoyed it, always lik an HEA!