All Comments on 'Elf and Safety'

by oggbashan

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ag2507ag2507over 2 years ago

You old bugger: you made me cry.

bigbob2406bigbob2406over 2 years ago

I seem to have something in my eye!!

Griffin_ScoutGriffin_Scoutover 2 years ago

sad ending. but I still loved it.

Lector77Lector77over 2 years ago

Your writing always gives pleasure, this time more than usual.

Thank you.

MaonaighMaonaighover 2 years ago
From one old bugger to another...

I was planning on giving you four stars until those two final paragraphs---they upped the ante to five, happily given. And thanks for the lump in the throat!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very poignant!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That was awesome

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Beautiful story. Love it. AAAAAAA++++++

stewartbstewartbover 2 years ago

It was a sad ending ... but then everyone's end is sad. Thanks for the story.

steverob1054steverob1054over 2 years ago

Brilliantly written as ever Oggbashan - you truly are a master wordsmith. Thank you for all the enjoyment you have given me and, I'm sure, countless others.

the1with2handsthe1with2handsover 2 years ago

Very sweet! A band is not just the people on stage playing the instruments (or singing), there's always one or a few more people behind the stage, just as important!

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Can I now change bio? oggbashan was diagnosed as terminally ill and expected to be dead by June 2018. As you can see. I am still here. . As long as I can I will continue writing and posting on Literotica but there will be an end - soon. I don't expect anyone to like ALL of my...

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