All Comments on 'Eli's Awakening Pt. 02'

this is just excellent. the writing the story everything, please keep it going if its not too much trouble

Great story .Plse continue

Also living on an island were there's plenty of sun

The wonderfull Caribbean

Hello. I Have read now both of your stories. While I was reading the first I was impressed by the humour that came through as well as the accuracy, the puctuation, the grammar and so on. Thank God for an author who can spell. This, the second story is lovely. It tidies up loose ends, and leaves one faintly regretful for not meeting these people - totally silly really given that they are people of fiction. But that is the mark of a very good author - to draw the readers in and entangle them in the web of the story. So thank you. As others have said, please write again. My best wishes and regards, Michael

This was an amazing story. Both parts. You are a talented writer. Keep up the excellent work!!!!

Beautifully orchestrated and sexy as hell! I hated for the story to end and I can only hope that you will write more. I believed every word of this story and it doesn't get better than that. Bravo!

Please, please write part 3. I would love for Eli and John to get married and have children together.

Just flat loved it! :)

Thanks for writing and sharing!!

Great story. Rushed sex scenes. Remember, this is LitEROTICA.

Thank you!!? Great ending to a wonderful story