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All Comments on 'Eli's First Time'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Lacking

Good beginning with the build up, but then rushed finish. It's Eli's first time . Do him justice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Really really really really really good. Just amazing. I wasn't looking forward for something that good. I actually jumped around the house after reading this , out of excitement.perhaps because I match ALL the qualities and circumstances and persona of the protagonist. Maybe it was rushed in the end. Idk cos I am a virgin lol.

danoctoberdanoctoberover 2 years ago

Sweet and Gentle. No unexpected nasty surprises for Eli. His new friends were simply normal kind kids. Happy ending. *****

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