All Comments on 'Ella & Evan - Valentine's Coupons Pt. 02'

The story is good, the only thing I would say is make sure you proof the story before sending it to publish. There are a few areas that make the read a little tougher to read, not too badly but some caused me to stop and reread which takes away from the story a bit.

Other than that your storyline is really good leaving a lot of anticipation of what might happen next, who has the book, I think maybe it's Shanti but could Ridley be a possibility. Please continue the story.

You still have my interest - it seems you foreshadow Ridley has it with her getting the shirt that was in Ella's purse. Look forward to where you lead us - 5*

Has Ella had vaginal sex with other men?