All Comments on 'Ellen's Holiday Encounter'

If it would have been me, little Dee would have had a hard cock pushed up her tight asshole,weather she wanted it or not.Standing and watching Ken fuck my wife, with a hot little bitch in front of me, I know I would have to use her in ever one of her holes.....Rich

Am I the only British person who isn't a swinger, slut, stud whatever they are called these days? I am surprised any one in Britain is still married. Well Ashley enjoy your lifestyle, enjoy the creampies your wife will feed you. And good luck with your marriage I hope it lasts longer than most do in Britain but somehow I can't see that happening.

Loved the story, fantasy is a lot of fun though with lots of communication making it a reality is fun too.

see my wife fuck another man " story. What the husband really means ( and the writer also)_ is that the husband would really like to suck another cock but doesn't have the balls to do it and gets his wife to fuck him while he watches and jerks his pitiful little two inch pecker marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

Where do these so called men crawl out from?

who hasn't the balls to fuck the wife of the guy who is fucking his wife.

Looks like I need to take a trip to the UK since it seems this is where all the bitch husbands originate from.

not only is it same old same old

also a language which uses "they were so wet with vagina cream" is not exactly a turn on...

All in all: terrible

I would not advocate violence against someone you profess to love. If you have a gun I suggest you get it out and clean it. Forget to unload it first, that way it will look like an accident and not suicide. There are other ways to save yourself but this is the quickest and it puts you out of my misery. A misery brought on by reading this crap.

Poor writing, poor subject matter. I look more to writing abitity as to subject matter. Waste of time. Your kink is not mine. I offer feedback as per your requset. I also do not choose to be Anon. DJ McLellan

From every point of view, childish.

Fuck the critics!! They are just stewing in their own jealousy. Write more!!!

at least you got your fun too. as for me, as a result of wanting to watch my wife fucked by another man, she literally made me watch her get fucked. at the heat of the moment, she even lets the other man fuck her up her virgin ass.however i shouldn't complaint as this is part of her term and conditions for her to agree.anyway,i've got my wish fullfilled and my wife had given me the greatest show ever....lol.

at least you got your fun too. as for me, as a result of wanting to watch my wife fucked by another man, she literally made me watch her get fucked. at the heat of the moment, she even lets the other man fuck her up her virgin ass.however i shouldn't complaint as this is part of her term and conditions for her to agree.anyway,i've got my wish fullfilled and my wife had given me the greatest show ever....lol.

Wow another sexy story! I love panties. from Derek.

I know that watching Ellen get it was a priority. Dee has her routine when Ken plays.

However, Tiger should have been more creative in the room with the 2 way mirror and gotten behind Dee and shoved it up anally - BINGO !

The very first sentence of the story, while long, is not a complete sentence! Several other grammer errors detract from story. Thankfully not very long.

An extremely poorly written childish fantasy of another wimp and his willing whore.