All Comments on 'Ellen's Tale Pt. 02'

An enjoyable episode, Shaima, with a nicely tense cliff-hanger. You're introducing a cast of very unpleasant people and it's getting hard to decide who to trust and who not. Try not to keep us in suspense for too long...

Intense!!

While this story is well written, it has become a "quite a bit dark" for my really being able to enjoy it. One "Major Issue" I have, is with Tabitha having a prominent role, where the "Motorcycle Gang & Corrupt Police" are possibly coming violently for her Mom. Having a 9-year old child being placed in this type potential crossfire is just not something which I enjoy reading. There is sufficient crime in this world today, that I am not really thrilled with the possibility of a child being "Killed" in what is written to be a "Lesbian Love Story"!!

The story is written well as a 5*Star presentation, however I was definitely dismayed with the potential for violence by multiple parties against a young girl, as well as the other females!!!!!!! I normally re-read most of Shaima32's stories 1 or 2X times, annually, however there will not be a re-read of Ellen's Tale for me.

Thats pumping blood into different places .... Wow great tale and your writings are breathtaking

Heart gripping drama I am tingling with suspense.

Love it