All Comments on 'Ellie and the Deli'

An absolute delight from start to finish. Erotic and sweet, and by the end I felt as if I knew these characters. Thank you for this little gem of a story. You rarely disappoint.

Not exactly my usual type of story , but i must say once i started reading it , i could not stop , very erotic without the wam bam thankyou maam if you know what i mean .

What a beautiful story of two people who gave each other a very needed gift. Ellie now has a beautiful memory and Anthony was given the confidence go live his life.

absolutely the best story i've ever read on this site, keep up the good writing as it is appreciated, thank you

This story was sweet, funny, romantic, and the narrative flowed perfectly. Regardless of author or genre, it's one of my favorite short stories. EVER! Bravo!

Not much more I can say I did like it

What a captivating story. Very well done.

What a great piece, even for a geezer who still loves May Dec stories. I've always loved mature women and Ellie is a gem. TY for a great read. Kal

Thank you!

Excellent! A very easy 5*!!!

Lovely and well written, it felt so real!! For once no big dudes, no milf with gigantic breasts like this is the only thing on the planet to be erotic... It is actually very wrong. Being the most erotic is being completely yourself with a partner, and the eroticism of being able to feel that as the partner makes you feel that way. I'd love to meet such a partner. I'm not very young myself (nor old), I never felt so confident, but thinking about someone who can deeply appreciate what I have to offer like it's a treasure... precisely as you've described in your story. Well, I may or may not meet them in this lifetime, let's hope :)