All Comments on 'Ellie Ch. 03'

The rape in chapter 1 was not a good start for a story. Either you redo the chapter or simply delete it in any case to me you're sick putting a rape in a story like it was normal, then try to validated the rape by writing oh she like it, it was repressed love on her part. I don't care what other say about me bad mouthing you. You deserve it. And since your fetish is non consent then go out there and get yourself rape and after tell me you like it. I did not read chapter 2 nor will I read this chapter.

excited you updated finally! can't wait for next chapter !! don't listen to mrusa, I love it and a lot of people like it . let's all be sickos together

Thank you for all of the feedback it makes me become a better writer. I have been given so much support by the readers on Literotica and I am greatful. I am also well aware that this story is not everyone's cup of tea. However my first chapter was tagged under non consent. If that is not your forte then please do not upset yourself by reading it.

Honestly, good story the only thing that could make it better would be more POV from Gabriel's perspective. As for the rape in chapter 1... I think it adds a much more intrinsic value, life isn't black and white, shit happens but what matters is how the actions are atoned for. Keep it up, I rarely see so much potential. One last point though, grammar is not your friend but I could care less.

any update on pixie ?

It makes me laugh that the commenter took the time to comment on the THIRD chapter how she/he felt about the first one. Like really no one cares just offer constructive criticism and be done with it.

I happen to really like this story and want to see where it's going to go. Please update soon!

Please please continue this story.

Looks like you're not continuing you stories :( such a pity , they were the top stories I was looking forward to </3

Please finish it!!

Sucks that you haven't updated in a long time. But it's a new year so hopefully this would be your new year resolution!!! We are patiently waiting for a new chapter (:

Great story, please update. Can't wait for more.

Please finish the story, its good.