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All Comments on 'Ellie's Work Night Away'

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleabout 8 years ago
Tricky task...

...going back and forth between 1st person, 2nd person, and 3rd person. You almost pulled it off but not quite. You slipped up once and beside that, it got a bit confusing and awkward. "They wave you over?"

Good effort, though.

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