All Comments on 'Elunara: Mission Specialist Ch. 13'

I had to write a one act play, and I knew just what I wanted to do. I wrote this, removed the sex scenes, hinted at them, and then read it to my class.

I amuse me.

tease the new readers in your class with a taste of your series is a good idea. Why do I see an attempt at hate fucking to show dominance from Vicky against Elunara only for it to turn around and they become friends.

We already know Vicky and Elunara will never be friends. This is the bitch, Elunara threw her son out of the house and into a water pit when he slept with her in Elunara's bed. And Grogek threw him in all over again when Elunara told him.

are you doing anymore writing here or have you had your fun writing?

I posted this last night, but it didn't go through.

I have plans for a few more mission specialists, and more plot lines to write on "for the whored".

I spent a good chunk of last year working on an original novella that I submitted for a competition, and then continued that piece for two more parts. I have "finished" but not edited the story. I will get it ready for official publication at another time, right now I'm waiting to see if I won or not.

I have more to say on "For the Whored" and quite frankly, have no idea when I will actually stop. Perhaps when it catches up with the "epilogue" I wrote and posted. I am writing for myself, and where my little brain takes me, not for any other reason. I will let people know when I think I'm finished. I thought I was finished before, but Elunara calls to me. I am re-reading "for the whored" first so I don't have any more continuity errors I've been noticing, and so I can see where I've been, to think about where I will go.

I will continue writing, it just may be on a new novel. I am currently attending college and that takes up my time. I also don't want to post more until I get a nice backlog of chapters. I will tell people where to find more of my work later.

For the e-book of this story, check out barnes and noble, or smashwords, and look for "GG Ryan".