by illicit_writer
Great writing, great twist. The threesome part did it for me, well the whole story has and this chapter when he felt the warmth in his ass, I knew he was being fucked by Rob, which made me cum because this is my fantasy, well-written. (Some will probably say I'm a "fag" or other derogatory term, no, I'm a long-married man with this fantasy and yes I am a cum-eater, my wife likes me to eat my own creampies). When she brought her cum covered fingers to his lips, I did the same to honor your writing. Please keep writing. I hope this story can keep going.
Unimaginative, mundane and unoriginal. Nothing sexy or erotic about it. The dialogue was flat and dull. This has dragged on too long and just isn't interesting. I'm at the point where I simply don't care who was doing what to whom.
I've enjoyed the series and really enjoyed the latest chapter as Ken finally turns in to a cuck. Hoping there are a few more chapters with these characters.
I loved the little surprise and so did ken.. great addition to your wonderful story.. any takers our there?