All Comments on 'Email to Val'

by englander1961

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Sweet and Hot

You get right into a teen's mind, and with humor, too! I felt as if I was tasting sweet, hot liquid candy. You are pure delight Ms. England! I'm going to ruin my arm if I keep reading your stories and pumping "my thing." LOL

Don

knightfalzknightfalzalmost 20 years ago
Excellent work

You did a wonderful job with this story. Presenting it as an email between friends made it seem very realistic. The story was sweet and erotic at the same time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
save for the blather

very sweet - wish I had one of those spots

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good story

I like your style. It's sexy without being too slutty, its classy.

Nice to find a woman writing these kind of stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A lovely beginning

Your writing captures the sensual mood beautifully.

Anonymous
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