All Comments on 'Embrace Me Ch. 02'

Love your style!

He lay down beside her not he lied down beside het. Lied is an untruth. Otherwise very good but there could be more.

I enjoyed the story line. And details very much. Please continue writing.

I have every intention of continuing this story and Pretty Lily and I think about both stories literally everyday. The reason I haven't uploaded in a VERY long time is because I'm in college and therefore too busy to write for enjoyment. I promise you that these stories will be finished eventually and it breaks my heart that they haven't been yet. Please have faith in me!