All Comments on 'Emergence'

Super hot story! One of my favorites! Lots of fun to follow Jasper on his rediscovery of who is is.

This could and should definitely become a multi-chapter tale!

truly is a shame there is no 6th or 7th star. there was a lot of simple typos but the story line easily made those seem like they never happened. i loved your character development. dont know if this story has a future. but it could really be instrumental in a whole new reality. a series of stories possible entwined. i like the style you write please more like this.

This absolutely deserves a second chapter!

Amazing!!!

Brilliant! Just completely and utterly Brilliant! Well played!

Very good indeed, well written and as a reader we understand his state of mind at any given point during the story, which for a story dealing with recovery of personality and body is a must have. The other thing I was pleased with was the pacing of the story, gradually gathering speed as he regained who he was. Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz. 5⭐️

Nice twist! Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Absolutely fucking ridiculous, but I loved it. Glad he got his manhood back and had his two lady friends to share it with at the end.

Not exactly sure what I read but it was engaging and well written. Thanks for sharing with us readers.