All Comments on 'Emily'

by flashgordon562006

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prop69prop69over 4 years ago
Loved the open relationship. Why didn't she start her on Birth Control pills?

Can't wait for all three to add more fun to the family.

I must admit to getting a stiff wishing I was in the family.

horne5horne5over 4 years ago
next pls

i hope he pops her cherry soon great read

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I Enjoy the concept

Of teaching your children about sex, but the idea of continuously having multiple sex acts in front of them day after day without involving them seems extremely unlikely. The story itself was written in a very juvenile style.

flashgordon562006flashgordon562006over 4 years agoAuthor
Story

I agree with anonymous. I had to rewrite the story several times to accommodate Literotica. I should have deleted the story. Sorry.

BoxcarbillBoxcarbillover 3 years ago
Good read, except...

it needs an editor. You keep switching from present to past and changing names of people. Keep going.

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