All Comments on 'Emily Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good first story!

Don't leave us hanging. Hoping to read your next chapter really soon. Who doesn't have that one BUSTY plutonic friend and always wonder, what if?

knickerlover13knickerlover13almost 7 years ago
hot

well written good suspense, more please!

clearedtofuckclearedtofuckalmost 7 years ago
big tits

Okay I get the idea: gigantic tits. It seems like that pretty much sums up this chapter. Other than the big tits. You might want to review the big tits thing at the beginning of the next chapter.

GhostPlasmaGhostPlasmaalmost 7 years ago
Pretty Good

Here's to hoping for some character "growth".

OrbmansuperOrbmansuperalmost 7 years ago
Excellent

Love when cup sizes come up in stories, great work!

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