All Comments on 'Emily, My Cousin's Hot Friend'

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RickshawroadRickshawroadabout 4 years ago

That's just a tease!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Hope to hear more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Why waste time with this?

A piece of nothing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Find an editor. Learn grammar. Add substance to your story.

roar_58roar_58about 4 years ago

Nice start mate, keep it up. We all start somewhere and I like the tension build up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

You built up tension but went no where with it you should have continued you story

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