All Comments on 'Emily Plays'

Diana,

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. So many of us love Asian women and you certainly fulfilled many a fantasy with your story. You know, speaking selfishly, there must be a sequel somewhere in there.

duddle

This was a well-written story, but I was somewhat disappointed nonetheless. After Jen is mesmerized by the sight of Emily's pretty rear end in a thong, I was certain the older woman would at the very least want a closer look. Instead, she hardly pays any attention whatsoever to the oriental girl's beautiful butt. Instead it's the younger girl making all the moves, which to me lacked an erotic fantasy element. I would much rather have seen the older woman become the aggressor.

Why not have your sequel follow from their e-mail contact, maybe even a few years later? BTW, the story was hot, especially with the younger girl seducing the older woman. You could have had the older woman do more with Emily.

So HAWT!!! Write more!

Great story! I imagined that it was me with the girl! ;)