All Comments on 'Emily Pt. 01'

Oh yes...I can see this going in so many directions.

When will we see part 2?

I liked it...a lot.

Please write more to this story. Its going in the right direction so far.

Would love Mustafa's friends to get more involved as well.

This is looking really really good. Can we have a bit more of a description of what she's wearing to work.

Maybe a tease for us before she gets in there.

But great writing, and great premise.

Asian with a Pakistani accent.... riiiight.

Exactly where do you think Pakistan is? Africa? The South Seas?

Pakistan is part of Asia, therefore, Pakistanis are Asians. For the love of god, pick up an atlas before you comment. There should be an IQ test before people are allowed on the internet.

Her Dad's racism? Or Mustafa's racism?

Echoing the comment about the geographically-challenged commenters: Pakistan was once Islamic Northern India, which is definitely in Asia,

Wish you would continue your two stories. There was a flavaflav on ASTR years ago writing about a couple of different Emilies. If you are him those should be updated to Literotica terms and posted here as well: “Emily Becomes a Slut”, and “Girlfriend - Reluct Voyeur”.

(That was flava.flave@virgin.net or flava.flave@btinternet.com)