by emma_sub
simply marvelous. It seems such a common experience to reminisce about times gone by; reliving the best times, and yearningly wishing to redo the worst bits in a better way. Your dialogue is wonderful. Your descriptions compelling. Your narration is nearly flawless. Mmmm.
I've already peeked at the Also In This Series bar. I am saddened that the next chapter isn't there. Hopefully that is a simple oversight, and I will find it amongst your other submission. You have submitted it, haven't you?
Please keep writing.
It would be nice if a writer that puts "To be continued" actually followed through
with the statement.
Emma,
I very much enjoyed your writing but is this feed still active? If you would like
comments on this or other stories, please email me at: Renfre@protonmail.com
Thanks,
Josh