All Comments on 'Emma Pt. 01: Summer Vacation'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Started off poorly with Jordan / Avery confusion, then pretty basic after that. Not rated as two stars would be a bit harsh for a first story, but can't say I liked it, so not three stars either.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Random!

Random spelling, random punctuation, random... names! (Jordan suddenly became Avery!!!)

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