All Comments on 'Emma’s Bracelet Ch. 03'

by Mr_Owlow

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discblizzdiscblizzabout 12 years ago
EoS

While I'm sad to see the story end, I loved the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Awesome work!

That was a WONDERFUL Story, if only life could be that good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome story

If only all stories were like this ...

KenGoreKenGoreover 10 years ago

What a Brilliant, wonderful story. If only it was longer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
endless possibilities

there should be more to this story, much much more. The daughter is born, but has some DNA of the bracelet and limited power, even a few more girls to make the family larger.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Emma's Bracelet

Yes, I agree with ( Anonymous) posting that there should be way more chapters about this one. I also agree that they should have more than one daughter, but also want to read more of their hot sexual needs for each other and that Emma should grow her breast to a double D and leave them like that for when she goes out.

Mr_OwlowMr_Owlowalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Anyone is ...

welcome to use this universe and continue the story as they see fit, but for me I see it as finished.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sequel?

More! Write more. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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