by MaryAnderson
More......more....more.....more....MORE!!!......please? Awesome writer and story....loved it!
First time reading one of these erotica stories, and i must say it was amazing. The use of descriptive and defining words is just spectacular. You make it seem very real when you write and we read. Very good job! 20yo M
Mary Anderson, you are one of the best writers, if not the best writer on this site. This story is both sweet and erotic. The way that you led up to their coupling was brilliant!
Please keep writing.
Wasn't sold on the story after reading Chapter 1, but this chapter is far and away the hottest story I have ever read! Spectacular writing.
A well crafted story, using more unique descriptive words for body parts and the sex act. Excellent, Five Stars!